More cuteness! With an added dose of nekkid!Renji *nosebleeds*.
Er... For the vocab level of the fic and the fact that Byakuya is currently a cat, perhaps ambulated should be simply ambled? ^^" And shortly right after, it should be the twelfth division. Minor, but there. <3
Heh, so Urahara was in on this too? He's the one who supplied Yoruichi with the means, yes?
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Date: 2008-08-14 02:41 am (UTC)Er... For the vocab level of the fic and the fact that Byakuya is currently a cat, perhaps ambulated should be simply ambled? ^^" And shortly right after, it should be the twelfth division. Minor, but there. <3
Heh, so Urahara was in on this too? He's the one who supplied Yoruichi with the means, yes?
Yay! Chap 3 tomorrow then?